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DL ([personal profile] grlgoddess) wrote2009-08-14 08:37 am
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DW fic - Thoughts


Title: Thoughts
Author: grlgoddess
Characters: Doctor, Donna
Rating: G
Word Count: 213

Summary: Just a night at a beach.

Disclaimer: Don't own

AN/Warnings: Written for weekly drabble challenge #19 at [livejournal.com profile] doctor_donna. Prompt was 'beach'.


It was nearing midnight, and the moons were glinting off of the water, lapping on to the sandy shore. The beach wasn't where he had intended to land, not that he had really expected to get to Shan Shen on the first try. There was this delicious foamy drink he wanted her to try. However, she seemed to enjoy the opportunity to just lay on the sand and relax. The entire continent wasn't going to be discovered for another few centuries, so it was just theirs for now.

She had spent the evening soaking up the last of the glowing sun's rays. He had spent the time constructing elaborate spires in the sand. When the sun had begun to set, she had disappeared into the Tardis, returning moments later with a large basket. They had relaxed on a blanket, nibbling on sandwiches until long after the sun had completely disappeared. Under the light of the dual moons, they sat and fought and talked. As she dozed off, he remained awake.

As the midnight hour struck, he smiled at his ginger-haired companion and knew that things couldn't get much better. He knew she couldn't stay with him forever, they never could, but he hoped she would be with her for a good while yet.

[identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com 2009-08-14 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! Whhhhhhyyyyy couldn't it last? Darn the BBC!

This is lovely <3

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
Why indeed!

Thank you!

[identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com 2009-08-14 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh so sad that they made it to Shan Shen. Bad Shan Shen, bad!!

This was a lovely little scene :)

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thank you very much!

[identity profile] ghraphite.livejournal.com 2009-08-14 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
This little ficlet is so ... laid-back and mellow and relaxed that I can't work up enough unrelaxedness to be sad about what must come next.

I love that little moment.

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thank you!

[identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com 2009-08-14 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Beauty tinged with a hint of sadness. Simply lovely!

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
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[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! <3

[identity profile] cytherea999.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 07:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thats very sweet, great imagery

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-15 09:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] loves-glamour.livejournal.com 2009-08-16 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
aww this is beautifully written =)

[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com 2009-08-16 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)