The Death of Alan

So, in the Nanowrimo chatroom the other day, this guy called Alan came in. He just came in, swearing and ranting about the mod on the forums. We weren't even sure he was from our region (he is). We vowed to all kill him in our novels. Here is my excerpt of that. It was written during a couple of word wars, so some parts are probably repetitive and unnecessarily wordy. It involves Emma (my OC daughter of Donna and the Doctor who is currently suffering amnesia) and the Doctor. This is one of her flashbacks of memory during a near-death experience.

WARNING: There is a lot of foul language, that I didn't really feel comfortable writing, but for characterization's sake, there it is.

( No real Haegre Trulls were harmed in the making of this scene. )